Monday, May 11, 2015

PB3YAY

Of course, choosing just one article for PB3A was pretty tough. There were so many topics flowing through my head that I wanted to write about. I decided to look up ballet in Academic Search Complete and then pair that up with another issue that came up in through the search, so I settled on ballet and gender, looked through the given results, and chose the article titled Dancing Masculinity: Defining the Male Image Onstage in Twentieth-Century America and Beyond by Deborah Jowitt. The article goes through the history of male roles in dance and how they and the views on men have evolved since 1660’s. As someone who considers herself a ballet enthusiast, this topic seemed especially interesting to me because not only would I be able to provide factual evidence from the text, but also my own knowledge and views.

The topic is not super controversial, so I think translating this genre (a scholarly academic publication) would be fairly easy to translate into new different genres that are geared either towards a younger audience and an older one. However, I know that for me, translating this into something suitable for children will be much easier than doing so for adults. I think the reason for that is the fact that a scholarly academic publication, in a way, is already geared towards an older audience, although one could argue that its pointed more towards college students and such.

As far as turning this genre and topic into something more kid-friendly, I can see the article turned into either an illustrated book. Illustrated books and comics are easy for the kids to read and understand because they usually provide very concise language that is very to the point, and the colored pictures aid in understanding while serving as visual help. I would omit some of the details concerning complicated terminology and just leave more of the historical information and just stick to stuff that directly relates to the paper’s thesis. Young girls are usually somewhat interested in dance at some point in their lives, so they would have no problem reading the book/comic. But because the original article deals with male roles on the stage, I would also make sure that when young boys read this, they would not only be interested in the topic, but also be able to walk away knowing that dancing does not make them any less of a man.

For the older folks, I’d turn the article into something less bland and more interesting to read by turning it into a newspaper article. Why a newspaper article? Because the conventions of newspaper articles usually include things such as word count and writing style. And plus, older people tend to read newspapers (whether they’re online or in hard copy) way more than young people do. So if an article regarding male roles on stage appears in the paper, the chances of it being read by older adults would be much higher than them reading it in a peer-reviewed journal.



4 comments:

  1. I like how you took us through your thought process of choosing your topic to take on for PB3!
    Your writing style is very clear and to the point (something I struggle with, so I definitely learned a thing or two just reading this!)
    Its great you took the time to explain to us what the article was about in clear concise sentences so we know what to expect.
    It is obvious you know where to draw the line between an older audience and a younger one, so I am sure you know precisely which conventions to use.
    Another great point you ensured was making sure to appeal to both genders of the younger audience.
    However, I think you could have expanded more on what the newspaper article ( for the an older audience) would be about. I agree that simply being a newspaper article itself would gear it to an older audience, but what would the subject matter be that would keep them interested?

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  2. ALSO , totally out of context, but I think we went to the same middle school in LA! I don't know if you remember me or not but we are apparently friends on Facebook... HAHA so yea thats cool. HI :D

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  3. I think you chose a really interesting and original topic to write about! I feel like there’s a lot of stigma surrounding male ballet dancers, but the actual history of them and the specifics of what they do isn’t really talked about a lot. I really like that you pointed out that both young girls AND boys will be reading and enjoying the illustrated book— people often unnecessarily gender certain activities and passions (like ballet dancing) when, in reality, it’s open to be enjoyed by anyone. I like that you explained your reasoning behind choosing a newspaper article to cater to an older audience— it makes your decision appear well-researched and thought-out. It sounds like you’ve got this topic on lock, good luck with your WP!

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  4. I absolutely agree with you on your topic sentence, I too was having difficulty finding a scholarly article because there were so many thoughts and ideas going through my head. Anyway, I was super fascinated by your topic and what you want to write about. Although I did feel like this would be a challenge to dissect your article into genres intended for a younger and older audience. I like your ideas thus far (illustrated books for the youth and newspapers for the older) but continue to search for new ideas for your genres. What if an illustrated book is not such a good idea after all? Maybe a cartoon episode about a man doing ballet could do the trick but then again this is just my idea. But overall, I believe you are off to a fine start.

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