Of
course, choosing just one article for PB3A was pretty tough. There were so many
topics flowing through my head that I wanted to write about. I decided to look
up ballet in Academic Search Complete and then pair that up with another issue
that came up in through the search, so I settled on ballet and gender, looked
through the given results, and chose the article titled Dancing Masculinity: Defining the Male
Image Onstage in Twentieth-Century America and Beyond by
Deborah Jowitt. The article goes
through the history of male roles in dance and how they and the views on men
have evolved since 1660’s. As someone who considers herself a ballet
enthusiast, this topic seemed especially interesting to me because not only
would I be able to provide factual evidence from the text, but also my own
knowledge and views.
The
topic is not super controversial, so I think translating this genre (a
scholarly academic publication) would be fairly easy to translate into new
different genres that are geared either towards a younger audience and an older
one. However, I know that for me, translating this into something suitable for
children will be much easier than doing so for adults. I think the reason for
that is the fact that a scholarly academic publication, in a way, is already
geared towards an older audience, although one could argue that its pointed
more towards college students and such.
As far
as turning this genre and topic into something more kid-friendly, I can see the
article turned into either an illustrated book. Illustrated books and comics
are easy for the kids to read and understand because they usually provide very
concise language that is very to the point, and the colored pictures aid in
understanding while serving as visual help. I would omit some of the details
concerning complicated terminology and just leave more of the historical
information and just stick to stuff that directly relates to the paper’s
thesis. Young girls are usually somewhat interested in dance at some point in
their lives, so they would have no problem reading the book/comic. But because
the original article deals with male
roles on the stage, I would also make sure that when young boys read this, they
would not only be interested in the topic, but also be able to walk away
knowing that dancing does not make them any less of a man.
For the
older folks, I’d turn the article into something less bland and more
interesting to read by turning it into a newspaper article. Why a newspaper
article? Because the conventions of newspaper articles usually include things
such as word count and writing style. And plus, older people tend to read
newspapers (whether they’re online or in hard copy) way more than young people
do. So if an article regarding male roles on stage appears in the paper, the
chances of it being read by older adults would be much higher than them reading
it in a peer-reviewed journal.
I like how you took us through your thought process of choosing your topic to take on for PB3!
ReplyDeleteYour writing style is very clear and to the point (something I struggle with, so I definitely learned a thing or two just reading this!)
Its great you took the time to explain to us what the article was about in clear concise sentences so we know what to expect.
It is obvious you know where to draw the line between an older audience and a younger one, so I am sure you know precisely which conventions to use.
Another great point you ensured was making sure to appeal to both genders of the younger audience.
However, I think you could have expanded more on what the newspaper article ( for the an older audience) would be about. I agree that simply being a newspaper article itself would gear it to an older audience, but what would the subject matter be that would keep them interested?
ALSO , totally out of context, but I think we went to the same middle school in LA! I don't know if you remember me or not but we are apparently friends on Facebook... HAHA so yea thats cool. HI :D
ReplyDeleteI think you chose a really interesting and original topic to write about! I feel like there’s a lot of stigma surrounding male ballet dancers, but the actual history of them and the specifics of what they do isn’t really talked about a lot. I really like that you pointed out that both young girls AND boys will be reading and enjoying the illustrated book— people often unnecessarily gender certain activities and passions (like ballet dancing) when, in reality, it’s open to be enjoyed by anyone. I like that you explained your reasoning behind choosing a newspaper article to cater to an older audience— it makes your decision appear well-researched and thought-out. It sounds like you’ve got this topic on lock, good luck with your WP!
ReplyDeleteI absolutely agree with you on your topic sentence, I too was having difficulty finding a scholarly article because there were so many thoughts and ideas going through my head. Anyway, I was super fascinated by your topic and what you want to write about. Although I did feel like this would be a challenge to dissect your article into genres intended for a younger and older audience. I like your ideas thus far (illustrated books for the youth and newspapers for the older) but continue to search for new ideas for your genres. What if an illustrated book is not such a good idea after all? Maybe a cartoon episode about a man doing ballet could do the trick but then again this is just my idea. But overall, I believe you are off to a fine start.
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